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[WarninG]

Witajcie miałem napisać recenzję filmu po angielsku do szkoły na ocen,ę napisałem i chciałbym abyście ją zobaczyli i zobaczyli czy nie ma błędów gramatycznych lub jakiś innych, ponieważ zależy m na 5 .

prośbę kieruję do tłumaczy na tym forum albo od osób znających perfekcyjne angielski. Jakby było coś nie tak to dajcie poprawioną dobrą wersję . Dzięki z góry dam wam reputację

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"Before this battle is over, the world will know that few stood against many" – this is the motto of a film I am lost in admiration for. "300", directed by Zack Snyder, is an adaptation of Frank Miller's graphic novel. Ever since I saw the first trailer, I had been waiting for it to be released. I finally saw the film last week and I was speechless while watching this masterpiece of drama.

"300" is a compelling story of the Spartans, whose bravery and tradition forced them to stand up to the massive forces of Persia. The Spartans, led by King Leonidas and full of hatred, were certain of their victory over Xerxes and his army. Fearless, strong and invincible, Spartans were taught to never retreat or surrender. They believed that death on the battlefield, in service to their city, as the greatest glory they could ever achieve. Then there came the time when only 300 warriors fought a battle against the several times more numerous army of Xerxes, self-appointed as the god of gods. Whether the Spartans defeated their enemy or fell on the battlefield, you will find out after watching "300" or becoming acquainted with the history of the Battle of Thermopylae.

"300" is so gripping a film that 2 hours seemed to pass in the twinkling of an eye. I was absorbed by the whole story, the special effects and the music that enhanced the stunning fight scenes. This is definitely a film I recommend to anyone who can appreciate the talent of both producers and actors.

recenzja tego filmu : http://www.stopklatk...lm.asp?fi=23553

Edytowane 2 Lutego 2012 przez WarninG

[insp]

Witajcie miałem napisać recenzję filmu po angielsku do szkoły na ocen,ę napisałem i chciałbym abyście ją zobaczyli i zobaczyli czy nie ma błędów gramatycznych lub jakiś innych, ponieważ zależy m na 5 .

http://www.angielski...je/film-300.php

http://www.ang.pl/fo...rawdzenie/44988

http://www.e-ang.pl/...-Spartans-.html

dalej mi się nie chce wklejać.

Też Twoje?

Edytowane 2 Lutego 2012 przez insp

[Amfidiusz]

I pozamiatane

[WarninG]

Głupio sie czuje poprosiłem o napisanie koleżanki bo nie miałem czasu a ona mnie zrobiła w balona wklejalem wczoraj 1 zdanie do Google ale nie znalazło pewnie nie uwierzycie ale to prawda

[Gość naXe]

napisałem i chciałbym abyście ją zobaczyli

[Amfidiusz]

No to jeśli poprosiłeś koleżankę o napisanie, to albo wierzysz w jej zdolności językowe, albo nie. Nic tu po nas

[WarninG]

Dobra już mam swoje i unikalne wiem bo sam pisałem.

,,Transformers 3'', directed by Michael Bay from 2011 is a continuation of amazing series best-selling comic book series from the 90s film is about the struggle between good and evil presented as a war of robots coming from space.

Transformers 3 is a film, which contains a lot of action, high-speed twists and amazing special effects for which we managed to get used to the creator of the series. Autobots, as they call themselves do the fighting on the side of landowners are used to the toughest military action, elimination of secret terrorist centers and solve any problems the United States. The main character Sam Witwicky (Shia LaBeouf) is already out of college, lives with his girlfriend Carly (played by Rosie Huntington-Whiteley) he can not find a job even though he was honored by President Barac Obama During this time, the Decepticons once again planning to conquer Earth.

The negative side of that movie is that there wasn't a previous partner of the main character that is Mika Banes played by Megan Fox. Total film recommended for all fans of the series fighting machines. Interesting for connoisseurs of beautiful, fast and dangerous new Autobot cars will be assuming the form of a red Ferrari 458 Italia.

to jak możecie to zerknijcie oko proszę.

[godfather]

to jak możecie to zerknijcie oko

Wydaje mi się, że to jest trochę niegramatycznie napisane.